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| Name: |  Poon May Quan | | Title: | A Unforgettable experience
2014-08-03 02:39 | It was a scorching hot afternoon. Lily and her best friend, Jane was walking at the path.
Just then, a motorcyclist went by. He looked suspicious. Suddenly, he snatched an old woman's bag and ran away as fast as lightning.
Lily and Jane were shocked. They called the policeman swiftly. They also asked help from the passer-by.
After five minutes, the policeman came and caught the robber immediately. The old woman thanked Lily and Jane again and again. They were glad to help someone in need.
| | hi, (2014-08-20 01:08)
what the meaning of scoching and swiftly?
| | Poon Lin Ling, (2014-08-03 16:04)
Very Bad
| | Angie Ng Lee Hun, (2014-08-03 16:01)
Good essay
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