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Name: | NAVEENA A/P SOMADEVAN | Title: | MY MOTHER
2014-02-13 19:24 | My mother's name is Shyla.She is 45 years old.She is a housewife.She is a kind mother.Every day I go to school,she will prepare food for me and my father.In the weekend,she will bring me to the park.She will always guide me in my studies.Mother is like a candle that willing to burn their self.So make sure we respect our mother.'MY MOTHER IS THE MOST GREATEST MOTHER IN THE WORLD'. | | KAANA , (2014-04-23 17:16) your essay is really true !!!!! mothers are like candles willing to burn their selfs just for US !!! CAN U PLEASE DO MORE AWESOME ESSAYS !!!! ;)
| | Alia & Sam, (2014-03-01 19:17) Your essay is great but there is two mistake in your essay.First,the word weekend has no "s" in it.It's suppose to be weekends.Lastly,the word "Mother is like a candle that willing to burn their self".One of the parts needed an "is" in it.We hope you will learn from this mistakes.I hope you will do a better job in your essay.Thank you.
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