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Contoh Karangan UPSR: BERKELAH DI TEPI PANTAI, by PRIYATARSINI A/P CHANDRA MOHAN
Contoh Karangan UPSR
Name:N. Sembilan PRIYATARSINI A/P CHANDRA MOHAN
Title:BERKELAH DI TEPI PANTAI
2012-03-28 02:35
Pada hari Sabtu yang lalu, bapa saya membawa kami sekeluarga berkelah di tepi pantai Port Dickson.Kami bertolak ke pantai pada pukul 8:30 pagi dari rumah menaiki kereta bapa.Ibu saya menyediakan makanan dan minuman serta barang keperluan seperti tikar,pinggan,cawan dan sebagainya.  
 
Tidak lama kemudian,kami pun sampai di pantai Port Dickson.Kelihatan di sana sudah ramai orang.Bapa saya meletakkan keretanya di tepi pantai.Ibu dan saya mengambil barang yang dibawa dari rumah.Bapa saya mencari sebatang pokok yang teduh.Kami menghampakan tikar lalu meletakkan barang yang dibawanya.  
 
Selepas itu,saya dan abang saya menukar baju mandi lalu terjun ke dalam pantai.Kami bermandi-manda dengan menggunakan pelampung    dengan gembira.Bapa saya membaca surat khabar manakala ibu saya pula mendengar radio.  
 
Selepas beberapa jam,ibu memanggil kami untuk menjamu selera.Kami bersama-sama makan sandwic sambil mendengar radio.Setelah makan,kami pergi mandi sekali lagi.  
 
Selain itu,kami juga membina istana pasir yang besar.Bapa mengambil gambarnya.Kami juga bersama-sama bermain bola d tepi pantai.Ibu bapa juga bermain bersama kita. Kami berasa riang hati.  
 
Pada pukul 6:00 petang,kami bersedia untuk pulang ke rumah.Kami membuangkan tin-tin dan botol-botol ke dalam tong sampah.Kami pulang ke rumah dengan penuh gembira.Walaupun saya berasa penat namun saya berasa sangat seronok.Saya tidak boleh melupakan perasaan ini.  

 

Chanye_ol, (2019-03-05 01:43)
Nice essay but a little mistakes.  
Keep it up and you will receive higher achievement
 
, (2019-03-03 20:30)
Good
 
, (2019-01-27 18:58)
YOU ARE VERY BADDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
, (2019-01-17 01:45)
it's a good essay but you have to improve your spelling mistakes it means you can get all points do you know who I'm a I'm a English and Lillie writer UPSR a writer  
 
 

 
Yugindraa , (2018-08-16 19:16)
So so  
 
 
 
gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo*- ooooood

 
Kavitha, (2018-07-14 19:02)
agak bagus
 
Unknown, (2018-06-18 14:02)
Have some mistakes only
 
, (2018-04-28 18:14)
bad karangan
 
bgjhg,nbcb, (2018-04-08 02:43)
dsgdfbcv 21233wt
 
, (2018-04-08 02:43)
fgyto
 
No Name, (2018-04-03 02:33)
Nice
 
Jeevithan, (2018-03-18 15:04)
Nice  

 
Jeevithan, (2018-03-18 15:04)
Nice  

 
Ttttt, (2018-02-01 00:38)
Hmmm not so excellent hv mistakes
 
Koms, (2018-02-01 00:36)
Not so nice and exellent have some mistakes
 
Siti Noor Vanila a/p chocolate strawberry , (2018-01-26 17:53)
Nice & Good essays.:D  

 
Mimi, (2018-01-26 17:42)
Excellent. Nice. Not bad. The essays is good but have some mistakes.  

 
LLLLL, (2018-01-26 17:41)
NICE  

 
Seline, (2018-01-25 02:09)
Nice
 
how, (2018-01-19 00:38)
not bad
 
Priyadarshini, (2018-01-06 17:55)
Nice 👍
 
Nevin, (2018-01-06 17:55)
Nice good essay 👌👌👌
 
Nevin, (2018-01-06 17:28)
Nice good essay 👌👌👌
 
Priyadarshini, (2018-01-06 17:22)
Nice 👍
 
Darmishaah , (2017-05-14 09:14)
Good essay but lot of grammar mistake.
 
Dunno, (2017-04-24 21:35)
Very good  

 
dragonist, (2017-03-07 01:10)
ada perkataan yang silap juga
 
danish, (2017-03-07 01:01)
bagus karangan awak
 
Naviisha a/p khalaiarasan, (2017-02-28 23:43)
OK GOOD I LOVE IT ☺☺☺  
 

 
emmmmm, (2017-02-20 23:18)
good  

 
Osas, (2017-02-20 17:32)
Karangan yang panjang,bagus
 
nur zuliatasha, (2017-02-17 00:10)
Good job😊
 
Priyadarsini, (2017-02-16 20:22)
Bagus saya sudah baca kamu punya karangan ini bagus.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹*- 🌹🌹🌹
 
Bagus 😊😊, (2017-02-12 16:57)

 
Bagus 😊😊, (2017-02-12 16:57)

 
Bagus , (2017-02-12 16:56)

 
karangan fakta ke cerita, (2017-02-09 01:48)
zulhaimi
 
loveya, (2017-02-04 15:05)
apunene Joshua Goh Jia Wen
 
cy, (2017-02-03 23:43)
 
weird
 
pavitra, (2017-02-02 21:06)
tak bagus
 
siapa saya, (2017-02-02 15:34)
so good
 
, (2017-02-01 01:14)
Bnynye comment...Tkpenat ke Nur Fatiha bla bla....
 
Unknown, (2017-02-01 00:50)
Apehal karangan ni bagus sngt niiii...blehla I wat homework secepat yg mungkin...tq this website...😋😋😊😊
 
cwk, (2017-01-23 23:39)
so bad
 
Umairah , (2017-01-22 23:48)
Sangat bagus  
 

 
[●●««¦»¦»»√«—. ÷※®※««↑℉£¥℉¥. §, (2017-01-22 19:09)
Karangan yang sangat baik
 
Hamizal, (2017-01-22 01:47)
Bagus lah, TQ  

 
Aleeya, (2017-01-21 17:06)
👍👍👍  

 
Aleeya, (2017-01-21 17:06)
👍👍👍  

 
ariffin, (2017-01-20 01:06)
I so happy is the karangan!!!  
 
 

 
ariffin, (2017-01-20 01:05)
I so happy is the karangan!!!  
 
 

 
abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz, (2016-11-28 18:22)
1487
 
Angela , (2016-11-21 22:03)
Bagus!!! Thx
 
chanel, (2016-11-20 22:58)
it good for me la, thank for your karangan !
 
harry potter, (2016-11-09 23:02)
not so nice essay but okay. could have improved. not much points. disappointing!!
 
sktmi-hanaansofia, (2016-11-06 14:20)
Lorong Usahasama Pontian Johor  

 
loh, (2016-10-19 01:22)
biasa  

 
, (2016-10-16 23:08)
d后面加i=di不是吗?  

 
Paris, (2016-10-12 01:19)
Nice!!!!! i like it too! well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
kilan, (2016-10-03 22:22)
kalangan ini sangat bagus, tapi tak ada suasana di sana  

 
Tracy, (2016-09-04 23:17)
That's good for me!It help me so much😊
 
Tracy, (2016-09-04 23:17)
That's good for me!It help me so much😊
 
Tracy, (2016-09-04 23:17)
That's good for me!It help me so much😊
 
, (2016-09-02 16:18)
ape ni
 
TASHNAH, (2016-08-29 01:14)
super star bro. i like it.well dan
 
, (2016-08-20 17:41)
karangan yang bagus
 
Florina, (2016-08-19 13:38)
I like this composition.
 
secret, (2016-08-17 01:03)
bagusnya....
 
Dam good essay it will help me to get 6a . It is fukking easy, (2016-08-17 00:14)

 
, (2016-08-14 23:38)
Good
 
Kasturi, (2016-08-14 13:45)
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Kasturi, (2016-08-14 13:45)
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Jasvinah, (2016-08-14 13:41)
Wow...u have done a very good karangan... This karangan is useful for me to score 8a
 
, (2016-08-13 00:36)
good karangan
 
Tarinii Sivakumar, (2016-08-08 01:37)
Wow...u have done a very good karangan...this karangan is useful for me to score A
 
teva, (2016-08-06 01:14)
awesome congrats
 
XXX, (2016-08-03 03:17)
Your karangan is too good..I like it.👍
 
lee chin pau, (2016-07-28 04:27)
karangan ini merupakan sebuah karangan yang baik!  

 
Lemon Lim, (2016-07-20 00:30)
Lemon Lim:is a good karangan
 
BCE, (2016-07-13 22:28)
i just laugh.
 
BCE, (2016-07-13 22:24)
hahahahhahahahahahhahahahhahahhahahahahahhahahaha
 
BCE, (2016-07-13 22:23)
hahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahhahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahah*- ahhahahahahahahhahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahahahaha*- hahahahahhahahhahahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahhha*- hahhahahahahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahahhahahahha.
 
BCE, (2016-07-13 22:22)
good story for childrens. this story is helpfull for me.very very thanks.and congrates to another story. priya sister good luck.i like u.
 
amala, (2016-07-13 22:17)
hi  

 
adalea akma, (2016-07-12 13:14)
saya suka karangan ini terbaik
 
adalea akma, (2016-07-12 13:14)
saya suka karangan ini terbaik
 
adalea akma, (2016-07-12 13:14)
saya suka karangan ini terbaik
 
adalea akma, (2016-07-12 13:14)
saya suka karangan ini terbaik
 
adalea akma, (2016-07-12 13:14)
saya suka karangan ini terbaik
 
shyazwina, (2016-07-11 15:45)
karangan ini sangat bagus untuk saya
 
shyazwina, (2016-07-11 15:14)
karangan ini sangat bagus
 
Aini, (2016-07-11 15:11)
karngan ini lebih bagus dan baik dari saya
 
shyaz, (2016-07-11 15:09)
karangan ini sangat bagus
 
amir haikal, (2016-07-11 00:11)
Karangan ini sangat bagus
 
Harini, (2016-07-05 23:32)
Thank yoo  

 
syanie, (2016-06-25 23:50)
Terima kasih
 
ASHVINA KRISHNAN, (2016-06-23 02:15)
karangan ini memang bagus.
 
izzah cute, (2016-06-09 20:32)
Thanks.  

 
koon yuan, (2016-05-31 02:33)
My school harder karangan  
 

 
satiswaran, (2016-05-14 02:35)
nice
 
yusri, (2016-05-08 15:59)
best karangan
 
izzah cute, (2016-04-14 15:51)
thanks.
 
puteri, (2016-04-14 15:50)
saya
 
izzah cute, (2016-04-14 15:30)
thanks.
 
amreish, (2016-04-14 15:23)
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkk*- kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*- !!!!
 
rajesree, (2016-04-03 00:21)
wow amazing essay  

 
stacy, (2016-03-22 12:43)
best  

 
drageast, (2016-03-14 15:34)
So Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
 
mai, (2016-03-06 22:21)
Pretty good
 
Inban, (2016-03-06 21:57)
Good.you can also start the paragraph by describing the place . It is more BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like I like I like I don't like I don't that . I don't like okay I don't like I don't like blue I don't care show the never I like you I don't like you you like me I don't like you I like you you don't like me do you love me you would like I would like me I don't you with your name
 
Kaknsh, (2016-03-06 21:40)
You can also start the first paragraph by describing the place  

 
Kaknsh, (2016-03-06 21:40)
You can also start the first paragraph by describing the place  

 
Name, (2016-02-25 19:28)
Good
 
SHARWINA A/P SIVAN, (2016-02-23 21:31)
KARANGAN KAMU SANGGAT BAGUS..................SAYA SUKA KARANGAN KAMU.....................BAIK......BAIK..........BAIK.......*- ...BAGUS........BAGUS.............BAGUS..............
 
Janani bhaskar, (2016-02-23 01:31)
Very nice
 
, (2016-02-18 21:39)
karangan banyak cantik
 
rinna anandhan, (2016-02-13 23:07)
have a wrong bermain bola di
 
bananan, (2016-02-03 00:48)
too simple
 
GFNDJXNC A/L BALAN, (2015-11-26 15:29)
JNVNMC,M CV, NFMJHTFG6755TYUGHFN  
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THARMADARSHINEE A/P SATHYASEELAN, (2015-10-15 13:27)
HOBI SAYA IALAH MEMBACA BUKU CERITA.SAYA MEMBACA BUKU CERITA PADA MASA LAPANG.SAYA SELALU PERGI KE PERPUSTAKAAN UNTUK MEMBACA BUKU CERITA.
 
rakhee ruby, (2015-10-06 14:49)
good
 
Shantini, (2015-10-04 01:54)
Karangan yang cantik
 
Priya, (2015-10-04 01:52)
Bagus
 
Nipple chan, (2015-09-13 20:34)
Bad karangan
 
Jnrefjkbfjhbvjhvhewrbfwiherbfi. , (2015-09-13 20:31)
What is this baby can even write this
 
daiya kaur, (2015-09-11 22:06)
karangan tidak sedap
 
Danush, (2015-08-05 20:34)
Can you give you give me some tips  

 
Danush, (2015-08-05 20:33)
Bagus Dan tahniah  

 
Thiya, (2015-08-04 23:49)
Super
 
Jaysanthasvaruban, (2015-08-04 00:43)
Nice karangan.i like this keep it up  

 
Uzma nabihah, (2015-07-27 23:15)
Sedap karangan  

 
sukihui, (2015-07-23 01:03)
bagus karangan ni  

 
Aidilfitri, (2015-07-21 21:19)
Apakah fungsi taman?
 
Aidilfitri, (2015-07-21 21:19)
Apakah fungsi taman?
 
hahaha, (2015-07-18 00:48)
很好
 
, (2015-07-17 17:01)
bagus karangan ini.saya satu contoh lagi
 
suva, (2015-06-23 20:32)
Good
 
suva, (2015-06-23 20:32)
Good
 
suva, (2015-06-23 20:32)
Good
 
thiya, (2015-06-07 19:56)
tak baik. karangan aku lebih baik daripada ini. beter luck next time....
 
Akyun, (2015-05-30 13:52)
hi your karangan is good nice
 
, (2015-05-24 23:42)
karangan ini abalah sebuah karangan yang baik,bagus dan juga karangan murid cemerlang
 
rhineshwaran, (2015-05-12 02:01)
karangan ini kurang baik kerana ia tidak sesuai untuk standard UPSR
 
k loshini, (2015-05-12 01:58)
nice karangan
 
keerti, (2015-05-12 01:58)
perfect karangan
 
, (2015-05-03 22:10)
very nish karangan  

 
, (2015-05-03 22:10)
very nish karangan  

 
JACQUELINE, (2015-04-28 21:40)
 
A nice karangan good luck
 
sharvin , (2015-04-27 21:34)
Not intersting.Very mistake  
 
 
 

 
sharvin , (2015-04-27 21:29)
It very amazing  
 
 
 
 

 
no name, (2015-04-19 00:11)
agak bagus,boleh copy
 
Philbert CM Gan, (2015-04-18 22:40)
I always use this site to use as reference, your essay is very interesting to me. :D
 
YAHODA, (2015-04-02 00:43)
PRIYA UR ESSAY IS SUPER...U ALSO WRITING ESSAY LIKE MY SISTER YASHODA...WE R TWINS  

 
YASHODA , (2015-04-02 00:38)
REALY THIS ESSAY IS VERY NICE 2 READ...KEEP IT UP...GD LUCK 4 UR EXAM PRIYA...MUST WRITE LIKE THIS ESSSAY 4 UR EXAM...UR ESSAY IS SOOO GRAMATIC ...
 
xxx, (2015-03-29 20:03)
CVBN,M,../
 
NURUL NADIA SYAZANA, (2015-03-14 19:50)
BERMAIN BOLA DI TEPI PANTAI
 
RAVEENA A/P VERTRIVEL, (2015-03-01 16:56)
Did you get "A" in malay karangan exam  

 
RAVEENA A/P VERTRIVEL, (2015-03-01 16:40)
There is a small wrong.The "D" Only.The answer is di.It's ok better do next time.That all ya.I love this karangan.
 
tanpa nama , (2015-02-26 00:37)
teruknyer karangan
 
shafiq, (2015-02-15 23:20)
very good
 
secrwt, (2015-02-14 23:19)
Tiada rangka.
 
secrwt, (2015-02-14 23:18)
Tiada rangka.
 
sutharsaan, (2015-02-10 23:42)
it was so nice  

 
, (2015-02-10 23:35)
i love kisanthini  

 
syxuck kvjxj , (2015-02-10 03:25)
P,lvkvvvvkccvoc
 
ain sofea, (2015-02-09 20:51)
ayat dlm karangan ni banyak salah .. contoh (menghampakan) .. sepatutnya (membentangkan) tikar ..
 
, (2015-02-08 14:32)
Terima kasih atas contoh karangan yang diberi saya selalu melayari contoh karangan anda
 
Nur shahirah, (2015-02-07 19:50)
Hebat!  

 
njl a.k.a2003, (2015-02-05 22:17)
saye ske krangan ini cikgu juga suka dengan karangan ini....terima kasih !!!!!!!kerana sudih kongsi..!!!!!!!!!!
 
Vigeshan@Kumaresh, (2015-01-26 21:22)
hati kami senang dan berbangga  
merakan sepupu datang bertiga  
ditemiani ibu bapa mereka juga  
sambil bercuti hubungan dijaga
 
, (2014-12-18 00:20)
Good
 
super, (2014-12-03 17:53)
super
 
Kylie Choong, (2014-11-12 19:50)
Ok lah karangan ini kerana tolong saya menghabiskan kerja saya
 
Aira ^_^, (2014-11-04 01:30)
Simple and kreatif...
 
thavchelvi , (2014-09-24 03:14)
wdwfefefeffwfsdvcxbfgvnb bv vbfdsd jhausay ddhqhg7 hdydq gheg dgwydg dhsgdwygw hwhddddddddddddd hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hh h hhvhbbh nb ghbfhgfgehgahd fjhfyef dvuds vdfgbe bgfhd fibdsbfjfbf dvdv ejvd
 
thavchelvi , (2014-09-24 03:14)
wdwfefefeffwfsdvcxbfgvnb bv vbfdsd jhausay ddhqhg7 hdydq gheg dgwydg dhsgdwygw hwhddddddddddddd hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hh h hhvhbbh nb ghbfhgfgehgahd fjhfyef dvuds vdfgbe bgfhd fibdsbfjfbf dvdv ejvd
 
yoshini anak prempuan thanabalan, (2014-09-07 19:55)
Terima kasih to priyatarsini kerana u bagisaya karangan untuk upsr terima kasih ok
 
yoshini anak prempuan thanabalan, (2014-09-07 19:49)
Terima kasih to priyatarsini kerana u bagisaya karangan untuk upsr terima kasih ok
 
lohes, (2014-09-03 23:24)
saya sangat suka kamu punya karangan .
 
lohes, (2014-09-03 23:24)
saya sangg
 
ADRIANA RHOSKY, (2014-08-28 00:34)
Karangan ini sugguh bagus!!!
 
, (2014-08-16 14:52)
bagus  

 
chian, (2014-08-16 14:35)
karangan ini sangat bagus.
 
Kaaviya, (2014-08-05 18:14)
very nice its useful for my homeworks in school n tuitoin or to do my revision
 
, (2014-08-01 16:35)
 

 
apple, (2014-07-18 18:23)
good
 
nurameera asya binti ajiman, (2014-07-12 03:28)
cerita ini sangat menyeronokkan
 
Mohamad Luqmanul Hakim Bin Yusof, (2014-07-07 02:08)
panjangkan ayat sedikit..... perenggan mesti jarak dari tepi....  

 
nur fatimah, (2014-06-27 18:15)
Sangat baik  

 
preman rex, (2014-06-25 20:52)
tolong saya untuk membuat kerja rumah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

 
preman rex, (2014-06-25 20:46)
tolong saya untuk membuat kerja rumah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

 
preman, (2014-06-25 20:42)
tolong saya untuk membuat kerja rumah  

 
nur syafiqah, (2014-06-25 01:05)
Sangat terbaik
 
cr 7, (2014-06-21 14:33)
Tanks fo the essay
 
, (2014-05-24 18:41)
ok
 
Nuzul Jaslina, (2014-05-18 23:59)
good
 
yii, (2014-05-04 22:58)
sfzssf
 
nur fatihah nazuha bt yaakob, (2014-05-04 04:49)
Pada cuti sekolah yang lalu saya dan keluarga pergi berkelah di tepi pantai merdeka.kami bertolak pada pukul 8:30 kami sampai di sana pukul 11:00.ibu menyediakan makanan dan minuman seperti kuih muih,nasi lemak ,air sirap ,tikar ,cawan,mangkuk,dan lain lain.  
Tidak lama kemudian kaminpunntiba di pantai merdeka.saya dan kakak pergi mandi di situ sungguh cantik.saya dan kakak membina istana pasir.ada yang bermain bola baling dan lain lain.  
Ayah membaca surat khabar,ibu menyediakan makanan.
 
sdd, (2014-04-30 00:56)
mantap  

 
nila, (2014-04-21 17:23)
good
 
夜サッテヌセチノノヘ. ヘャハヒフフハツッッ. 彤彤, (2014-04-01 02:14)
=-=  

 
彤彤, (2014-04-01 01:20)
哈哈
 
初恋, (2014-04-01 01:19)
哈哈
 
RAJ, (2014-03-31 20:00)
AR
 
Navasri Padma Manikavasagam, (2014-03-27 21:17)
good
 
meera, (2014-03-21 14:33)
i am so sorry. and that comment my bro had sent.
 
natasha, (2014-03-21 13:59)
this story was the best story ever. and meera don,t comment like this okay
 
no name, (2014-03-21 12:31)
horrible , terrible , and unbearable
 
raeshika, (2014-03-21 12:30)
nice karangan... pls write a karangan about faedah-faedah menggunakan komputer. tq....
 
, (2014-03-08 18:55)
BERKEIAHDITEPI'PANTAI
 
DANIAL HAKIM, (2014-03-07 01:33)
SAya mahu surat kiriman tidak rasmi tentang bercuti ke suatu tempat perkelahan,boleh..??  

 
AK KAARTHEIK, (2014-02-23 01:27)
pada cuti sekolah yang lalu ,saya jumpa hantu kapcai
 
SAKINAH BT MAZLIN, (2014-02-20 01:07)
YOUR PARAGRAF IS GOOD AND :):):)
 
SAKINAH BT MAZLIN, (2014-02-20 01:06)
YOUR PARAGRAF IS GOOD AND :)M
 
, (2014-01-08 00:06)
tidak ada keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
 
DHANASRI A/PBATUMALAI, (2013-10-21 23:12)
i like to learn karangan
 
vickneswary a/p batumalai, (2013-10-21 23:11)
easy to learn@try to write karangan
 
wani, (2013-08-19 00:33)
thanxs sbb tlis kat sini ..
 
wani, (2013-08-19 00:25)
(Y)  
nopt ciplak
 
wani, (2013-08-19 00:24)
ghghghg
 
aiswarya, (2013-08-09 00:19)
Fabulous! very good karangan.
 
Suwethashini a/p Baskaran, (2013-08-07 13:47)
Terima Kasih. Karangan ini sangat berguna..
 
darshini, (2013-08-06 18:14)
this essay is not suitable and got a lot of common mistakes .!!!!  

 
Chew Wan Jing, (2013-08-05 21:31)
Saya berasa sangat baik  
Usaha lagi
 
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