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| Name: |  Nur Najwa Binti Hasin | | Title: | An Active Boy
2012-03-13 20:12 | Danish is an active boy. He is my classmate. He loves to play soccer. Every evening, he plays soccer with his friends at school field.
One fine evning, Danish played soccer with his friend as ussual. After he played soccer, he went home. His new shirt got dirty as he fell on the mud when he tried to kick the ball. His mother, Puan Maziah was angry and asked him to was his shirt. She felt upset, too.
Obeying his mother's advice, Danish took out his shirt and put it into the big automatic washing machine. It was located in the kitchen. So, he can save his time from washing it using an ordinary way.
Then, Danish bathed in the bathroom to clean his smelly body. He used fragrance and sponge to clean his body. He felt freshed after bath and ready to have a dinner with his family. He always believes that a healthy body ensures a brilliant mind.
| | ivan, (2015-06-16 20:10)
too simple for me
| | Awfa Hana Binti Mohd Syahiran, (2015-04-03 15:48)
Hi,Najwa...I like your story...but one word is wrong...that is'evning wrong...that true is 'evening' right...thank you...
| | hanim, (2015-03-22 17:28)
well done ! i really love your essay.
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| | idzannie adilla, (2014-09-28 00:21)
why the essays is too short?
| | syasa meliana, (2014-09-15 19:40)
bole la
| | , (2014-09-12 02:43)
Marinades
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