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| Name: |  Alexander Andrew Rodriguse | | Title: | BFF( Best Friend Forever) Part 1
2012-02-11 16:08 | Hi am Alexander Andrew Rodrigues I am 12 year old.I stay at Malaysia,Penang Butterworth 12200.I studies at Sekolah Kebangsaan Bagan Tuan Kechil.My hobby is Drawing,Playing computer games and Boling.I live at Pangsapuri Widuri Lorong 1 C-7-20.Today I am going to tell you about my BFF that mean Best Friend Forever.His name is Harith Hijjazi Bin Moktar.He is a Malay but I am a Cristian and from Potugal.His hobby is Drawing only.His ambition is to be a Arkiteck but my ambition is to be an Air Force Pilot.He lives at Kepala Batas.He studies at my school and I know him when I am 8 year old.He has 1 big brother,1 big sister and a small sister.I have a big brother and this part 1 story is about to end.This the last Paregraft I am going to tell.My brother studies at SK Kampung Kastam and His name is Ryan Rodriguse THE END. ( ps i will start my part 2 on next week) True Story From Alexander Andrew Rodrigues know as Rexrodrigues00 I am really kind and honest.
| | Sam & Alia, (2014-03-01 19:06)
You have several mistakes in your essay.The words have wrong spelling such as architect but you wrote arkiteck.Also the 8 year old.In the year part there should be an s there at the back of the year.Lastly,the word paregraft.It should be paragraph.I hope you will correct your mistakes.Thank you.
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